I've seen many artworks in my 18 years and yours looks like a 5th grader drawn it no offense. I have 3 sisters they all draw, the 1st is in 5th grade and her drawings look like a preschooler drew it, the next is in 6th grade and her paintings look like a professional did it, and the next is in her first year of high school and her anime drawings look like she ripped a page out of a book, and there's me my drawing is ok if I'm being honest as well