Answer:
Romans often describes a coming-of-age story.
Explanation:
Sorry just commenting for algorithm
When writing an essay you first want to start off by choosing your topic.
Secondly, you should brainstorm on a piece of paper so you have your ideas together and organized.
Then you should begin by writing your thesis statement and main ideas in the first paragraph.
After that you should have at least 2-3 body paragraphs explaining each main idea topic you wrote in the previous paragraph.
Finally you should end with your conclusion paragraph, briefly summarizing everything you talked about in your essay.
* As always look over it a few times and make any adjustments *
Answer:
I love going to the zoo with my dad. Many of the animals are cool and we like looking at animals especially lions. <u>because</u> (lions are big and strong and strong animals are scary) (Change : They are tough and ferocious, which makes them scary)<u> </u><u>in real life</u> but when they are in a cage it isn't so bad. <u>but</u> I would never want to be put in a cage because I would get sad. <u>so</u> (I don't know if the animals are happy or sad but) (change : Uncertain if the animals will feel happy or sad themselves) my dad (says)(change : said) that the animals at the zoo are very well taken care of and i shouldn't worry about them.
Explanation:
I added brackets to the parts where i changed the sentenced, underlined the parts I would cross out and bold the periods.
Where it says change : don't add that in the sentence.