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Answer:
These sentences already have correct pronouns. But they do have some other issues with word choice, structure, and punctuation.
Explanation:
Fever Pitch is an autobiography, so it is about the writer.
The book is about the author's relationship with football, and about football matches that the author watched. So the book is technically about football.
Deforestation has immediate consequences for the local population in terms of increased fuel scarcity, reduced supply of fodder, and leaf-litter manure. The unpredicted erosion, landslide, and lowland flooding, due to deforestation, are also major concerns in Nepal as well as in downstream countries...!
