Question

PLZ HELP MEEEEEE You will add at least five temporal words or phrases to your narrative and resubmit it. Print or save the Temporal Words and Phrases List to use as a resource. Revise your narrative by adding at least five temporal words and phrases. Place a (T) by each temporal word or phrase you added. Submit your revised introduction and body. Save your work to your computer or drive.

Answer 1

Answer:

The story opens with a quote "I am no bird; and no net ensnares me: I am a free human being with an independent will." People have the ability to make their own choices and decisions in life. Sometime in March, there is a boy named Daniel, who is having a hard time deciding about what to do in his life, because his parents Neil and Sharon have always something to say to him or about the decisions he will make in his life. One afternoon in a famous fast-food chain in Los Angeles Daniel talked to his friend Albert about the thoughts that have been going on in his head. Daniel thought that at some point Albert may understand him and will give him some advice. Will Daniel be able to overcome the things that on going on in his life? Or it will just make him realize something? We have our own choices and decisions in life, but sometimes there are people who will stop us from doing such st**** things and destroy our lives. We think that hearing the opinions of our parents can have a great impact on our decisions, but the truth is they were just there to direct us to the right path, they only wanted us to be truly happy. And it is good to have a little talk with them. You can also share your thoughts with your friend because they can also help you to see the bigger picture and realize everything before making a decision that you might regret someday.