Answer:
you need to add some commas and you need to add "the" in front of reader
The second sentence doesn't make sense.
Explanation:
I would suggest using Grammarly and proof reading your work at least 3 times out loud.
Answer:
believe the answer is mysterious, the mysterious part being who the stranger is and how they helped cinderella
Explanation:
Answer:
the dialog would help alot
Explanation:
a comma behind please, a comma behind Bunsen, a comma behind Eddie
