Question

Song lyrics for my mothers song

Answer 1

Answer:

I really like it!! Nice job!!

Explanation:

Have a great day!!
Skye~

Answer 2

Answer:

this is more of a poem but this is just its just wow im "impressed" no offence but like i've cried to my own poems but this has emotion and i wish i felt the same way about mine i kinda do but still if it were a song there would be rhymes because rhyming makes rhythm and in both poems and songs (some poems don't rhyme but who cares) rhyming is key and is very important because you need to be able to have it stuck in your brain or at least have it catchy but you need to kinda stay a bit more on topic in books you introduce your characters well in the beginning nobody would think hey that persons talking about their mom you need to have a proper start and yeah so thats all i got

Explanation:

already did ~ Night