Question

I am writing a text about a summer vacation, and was told to use these

Answer 1

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So, I'm not sure if you need a new text or If you want someone to check it, well I found out something that It's grammatically wrong, you repeat the word "luna" two times, so instead of that you can say: Por la noche, contemplaremos las estrellas y la luna y escucharemos algunas historias fascinantes sobre estas, narradas por mi abuela.

And also, you should use more the comma.

If you needed another text, you can text me and I write it for you! <3

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