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I dont see anything. But my advice is just dont use a question unless you are in younger grades. Depending on what kind of passage this is, maybe report on an issue. State an interesting fact for your passage for the hook.
I can't write you an entire essay dude...but i can help you with it.
In the introduction sum up what you are going to talk about it...The first thing you write in your introduction should be your hook, a hook is something you catch the readers attention with. it is usually a question.
For the body paragraphs explain a point and give examples.
your final paragraph should conclude what you wrote, your not trying to prove anything just to sum up everything, re state your points and conclude with a catchy ending.
I hope this helps.
There’s no way anyone could anwser this we don’t know what the passage was about and we can’t see it. Next time put more info
Answer: directly after the reason and as support for the rebuttal
Explanation: You need to back up your reasons with the evidence to support your claim, and you need to back up your rebuttal as well with evidence.
