The second one. <span>Tina recalled that, “She had really enjoyed her visit to Virginia.”</span>
<span>q2
The details provided about this experience are vague and ineffective.
</span><span>The word choice is equally vague and limited.
</span><span>Overall, this essay represents a limited writing performance.
q3
</span><span>The word choice is more general than specific, and sentence fragments create minor disruptions in the fluency of the writing.
Sentences are varied, purposeful, and well controlled, enhancing the effectiveness of the essay.
All ideas are strongly related to the thesis and are focused on the topic specified in the prompt.
The presentation of the two scenarios is too brief to be considered more than superficial.
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B. proof reading, she revised the draft, and moved the paragraphs around, now she needs to proof read it to know if it is better or not before she starts typing it up.
