-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
Answer:
Mattie and Grandfather learned about worsening condition of the city due to yellow fever.
Explanation:
Fever 1793, is historical novel written by Laurie Halse Anderson
. The novel is about yellow fever, an epidemic, that consumed many lives in Philadelphia in 1793. The novel revolves around the life of Mattie and her family during this epidemic period.
<u>In Chapter 8, when Mattie and Grandfather visited the newspaper office they learned that the condition is worsening in the city due to the yellow fever. And, that people are leaving the city and fleeing to other states. They also learned that death toll are expected to rise in Philadelphia.</u>
On the way back to home, Mattie and Grandfather encountered with a man carrying Mattie's mother's corpse.
C. the increased freedom of ordinary people after the French Revolution <span>
The Romantic period sprung in the 2nd half of the 18th century which was at the same time as the French Revolution. Writers such as Byron and Wordsworth showed their approval of the revolution as it was the representation of societal change in that period. For centuries France was under absolute monarchy and people were governed with scientific rules. The people, especially the working class were oppressed for many years. The revolution brought hope and a promise of brighter days. Romantics deemed reconnect with nature and show the uniqueness of each human being.
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Answer:
there is allot more terror and suspense
Explanation:
