ANSWER: I would want tye audience to understand that bullying happens to people of all ages and that it won't be completely stopped but it can be prevented. They should care about bullying because bullying is something that can happen to anyone and it really affects the person and people around them it takes away lives and there's no benefit to putting others down.
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B one half because g<span>enerally, </span>hyphenate<span> two or more </span>words<span> when they come before a noun they modify and act as a single idea.</span>
Okay, here’s what I’ll do for you. I’ll answer your questions in a few words, and I want you to make sure the answers are longer than the ones I give you. 1) This paragraph does not flow at all. 2) The rhythm is very choppy. 3) The most important ideas are when she moves to the West Coast because it gives more detail on her life. The least important is her childhood and how she is brought up because it hardly talks about it. 4) The ideas aren’t well connected because it just states facts and doesn’t expand on them. 5) The relationship is basically what ever happened next in her life, no detail. 6) I would add more detail and make the sentences less choppy. This should help you rewrite the paragraph.
