The thesis statement "Private retirement systems have grown in the past twenty years because they provide extensive benefits to self-employed people." is an example of a unified statement.
Unified statement although looms from the rest of the text, it still clearly relates to other parts of a paragraph.
Facts should be included in your "facts sheet"
Climax leading up to Johnny’s deaths and eventually reaching it includes “Stay gold, stay gold Ponyboy”
The passage of the poem is not presented. Please provide one.