Question

Rewrite the short story so that it is more descriptive

Answer 1

Answer:

Elise painted a lot because she entered the community art contest. She used many different colors so the paintings had depth. Celise, her sister liked to make her think she wasn't going to win by teasing her which made Elise nervous and worried. Since Celise was teasing Elise, she got mad and upset with Celise, because she wanted to win the art contest.

Explanation:

I don't think this is that great but I hope it helps you!

Answer 2

Elise’s community was hosting a wonderful art contest and Elise was determined to win. Elise was a natural-born paint and used many bright colors to assure her win. Cecily, Elise’s sister, would constantly tease Elise by saying how she might not win. Elise’s passion for art and her drive for wanting to win the contest was quickly deteriorated by a few words from her sister Cecily. Because of Cecily’s words, Elise quickly became upset with her sister.