I believe the answer is D. Lack of Parallel Structure.
Answer:
but the girl before him, went n crossed a line
and all the other people know what used to be in their minds
then he got so scared for that babies life
he took him in his arms and wrapped him up tight.
he knew they had a bond
no one could break
so he broke the barrier
and made everything right
Explanation:
It should have the main idea and why it is.
The answer is B. exposition, the exposition gives info on the story and background characters before the plot takes place.
