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gizmo_the_mogwai [7]
3 years ago
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Is this a good thesis statement for my essay?

English
1 answer:
horrorfan [7]3 years ago
6 0
In general you want to be a bit more concise in forming a thesis statement. Usually you should shoot for between 1 and 2 sentences summarizing your argument in a concise way so that it is easily understandable to the reader. I would take what you have written and look for your main argument and try and put that in 1 to 2 sentences. 
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