The correct answer is A.
The author does not allude the visitor as being Herbert. He merely call it "the thing outside". Therefore, this is not a way the author creates suspense in the story.
The rest of the options: the description of the scraping, the echoes of the knocks, and the difficulty to find the object that was needed, are all elements that help build up suspense in this passage.
Answer:
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B. A timeline
Explanation:
In order to write fictional narrative short story, you need to have a timeline so that you know when a celebrity achieved something. A timeline is also useful for other things like social studies.
A. Long and complex sentences can create a much slower pace because of how you read them
