The following should be eliminated to create a formal tone in writing:
<em>1. Contractions- </em>Contractions refer to short forms, that combine a long word, or two words into one word, by using an apostrophe. Examples of contractions include shortening "would not" to "wouldn't", "cannot" to "can't", and "should have" to "should've". Contractions should be avoided in formal writing, since they are generally used informally and conversationally.
2. <em>Slang language</em>- Slang language refers to the use of informal and colloquial language. For instance, if you use words such as "Yo", "Bro", "Turnt", "Fleek", etc. Slang language must be avoided in formal writing, so that it does not deter from the effectiveness and tone of the text.
<em>3. Opinion statements</em>- In formal writing, objectivity is key, thus, opinion statements- which are subjective in nature- must be avoided. An example of an opinion statement would be: "The research study indicated that toddler boys are more aggressive than girls. However, I disagree with these findings."
With one full swoop with her scissors, madame had mannaged to cut around 8 inches off of my brownish blonde hair. I sat there in silence as i watched the strads fall and hit the ground. I had not expected her to take off that much hair. I turned and looked in the mirror to see my hair, it was so uneven and choppy looking, my hair only reached to my jaw. Panic set in, without knowing, I beagan to cry.
"do you not like it?" madame said curriously.
"no i HATE it."
"well, if you dont like the look, you might like the price ill pay for the hair i cut." madame said happily. i just sat and waited for the price. "ill pay 250 for this hair of yours. that will be enugh to buy you 4 wigs." she said. But, i didnt want the wigs i wanted my hair back. i agreed and took the money........
(i dont know how to end this, so you will have to come up with the ending, and sorry for the typos. please let me know if this is okay or not, and keep me updated for the ending you put!!)
Answer:
bye ayman I wish you luck, good luck
Explanation:
thank you
