Answer:
i dont really know the context of the poem but just try adding adjectives
Explanation:
I took a more sad approach:
The old, frail man trudged across the
cold dead ground simply waiting for the very familair and found sound
he simply waits for the hopeful triumphs when it is done
he has taken a rose gun the rose
shreiks in agony and slowly falls its delicate petals
revolving in dark metal bars
