In narrative writing in your writing in first person mode so you have to start your sentences with I.
try writing as many vivid details as possible.
Use dialogue by can help you engage with the reader and add some realism to it.
it's important to weave your emotions so you can engage The reader.
Love at first sight
This passage is describing the way Armand fell in love, in the same way everyone in his family fell in love. It describes the love as being shot by a pistol which shows that it happens immediately the first time they see the person that they are falling in love with.
Written sentence has a formal style and tone.
