I believe it is the second choice
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The trip to EXPO 2020 was awesome today!! We got to go to the Surreal fountain and we stood on water. We also went to so many pavillions!
It was epic, I’d honestly love to go again!
add your own touch ups if u want, hope this helpss!
Hello there! :)
A good thesis statement needs to boldly state your points discussed in your argumentative essay.
Ex: The extent of the dress code policy should be reduced as strict restriction of clothing discourages individuality, widen the gender inequality gap, and stresses conformity among students.
Hope this helps, and good luck with your essay! :)