I like it. You're a natural at it! Free verse are my favorite poems. I write poems myself but it's hard to write dark poems that have to do with depression, sorrow and things like that. I always wanted to try it but couldn't and trust me everyone has problems. So awesome work! honestly your poem depicts the sorrow, sadness, and the depressive side of what is to be down and find no meaning to anything.
I also liked that you react and say wait a minute I gotta get up and find the positive things to life. Religion also adds hope inside the poem which makes readers feel comfortable knowing that something is their to keep up their hopes. You know something; when I first found no purpose to my life I found a website called JW.org and that helped me get going and learn what is the true origin of life. It has good advice in what I should do in life? What is the reason to live? Is evolution real? Among other things.
Answer:
Repetition in "the raven" gives the sensation of dark and dreary mood, the word <em>"nevermore"</em> is repeated at the end or nearly every stanza.
Repetition of consonant sounds is here:<em> "and the silken sad uncertain rustling of each purple curtain"</em>. This consonance let people know what Poe was thinking when he wrote the text.
Point of view is the despair of the man and the echo of his sadness throughout the whole poem.
An allegory is often a story that has a moral or a hidden meaning. For example Adam and Eve, you know that story right. The moral is “Is one taste worth losing everything else you have” this can stand and be interpreted for many reasons