I dont believe so because we dont have a full subject.
To make the sentence more precise, Gordon should revise sentence 1 to provide specific details about what "struck" him as he first entered the room.
In sentence 1, Gordon simply stated that when he entered the room, he was struck by what he saw. He, however, failed to provide further details about what he saw and what made it striking.
To improve on this and make the sentence more specific, Gordon should provide details about what he saw.
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"we will not only defend ourselves to the uttermost but will make it very certain that this form of treachery shall never again endanger us",
"we will gain inevitable triumph"
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