Hello! You've done well so far by adding a simile (stanza 3, line 1) and repetition (stanza 1, beginning of lines 1 and 2). But I'd like to help add some personification to the poem with the first 2 lines since A. it rarely shows up and B. it's one of the most important factors towards a poem when creating something with such detail.
"The future winking at us wishing us good luck
as we wash away worries with ideas of us being stuck"
These two lines offer personification because we give the "future" a human attribute of winking and wishing luck towards a person. Also, Alliteration is included in both these lines which can be seen by the repetition of "w"'s makes it's way in the second half of the first line and the first half of the second line.
I want to add some repetition for the end since you started with repetition at the beginning since it'll bring your ideas together in a much neater way.
"My family still keeps it's traditional pride
My family will push on making one last stride."
You have the repetition in "my family" as you used above, and it explains the ending of the book with the family still being who are they, only they accomplished there goal by making one final action, which is making the move.
I hope these lines help and if you need any more help, feel free to ask!
Simile. Similes use "like" or "as" to compare different things
Answer:
Much has been said about the ancient Iroquois "Great League of Peace"'s inspiration in planting the seeds which led to the formation of the United States of America and its representative democracy.
Explanation:
<em>Founded by the </em><em>Great Peacemaker in 11421,</em><em> the Iroquois Confederacy is Earth's oldest living participatory democracy2. The United States in 1988 A resolution3, which said, paid tribute to the Senate. "The confederation of the original 13 colonies into one nation was inspired by the Iroquois Confederacy's political system, as were many of the democratic principles expressed in it. The Iroquois Confederacy's members, also known as the Six Nations, call themselves the Haudenosaunee (pronounced "hoo-dee-noh-SHAW-nee"). It means "longhouse peoples," referring to their long bark-covered longhouses that housed many families.
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