Question

Writing Skills Personal Narrative?

Answer 1

The most important thing when writing a story is putting a clear image in the readers mind. In order to do that I recommend making sure you are super detailed when describing senses. (See,hear,smell,taste, feel)

Answer 2

A few things to writing in general: first is organization. You choose appropriate writing topics and narrow down until you find the one to write about. After choosing a topic, then write down ideas with personal narratives. But it seems like your main problem is with effectively editing and revising your work. You need to check narratives for correctness and find mistakes in your writing. Good luck!