ALLITERATION is a literary device that consists of the repetition of the initial sound in a group of nearby words. The term alliteration can only be applied to consonants. For example, "Mike's microphone makes much music".
The repetition of initial sounds in the phrase "wild and whirling words" is an example of alliteration. Alliteration is employed by authors in order to provide a melodic rhythm to a text. Alliteration happens when several words with the same consonant sounds appear close together. The device is common in both prose and poetry, and it is one of the most common literary devices in the English language.
"<span>b. had been a most unpleasant coincidence that the power outage had come when we had guests staying over; the entire house was full" uses a semicolon correctly because there is a long pause. </span>
It's great! I think if you changed the word "do" in "I wouldn't do those immoral acts" to "commit", you could follow the flow of the words, but other than that, I can find no fault! :)