Ounce, Its Metric unit of measure
Reduce, Reuse, Recycle. ...
Use Less Heat and Air Conditioning. ...
Replace Your Light Bulbs. ...
Drive Less and Drive Smart. ...
Buy Energy-Efficient Products. ...
Use Less Hot Water. ...
Use the "Off" Switch. ...
Plant a Tree.
The sentence has been rewritten in correct parallelism below:
- Children need to be loved, nurtured, provided for, and disciplined.
Parallelism is a style of writing in which words follow a particular pattern that lends rhythm and balance to the text. The way in which certain parts of the text are constructed is similar.
In the above sentence, the addition of the phrase, 'should be,' altered the correct pattern that the sentence had at the outset.
To balance the pattern and rhythm of the sentence, the past participles of the verbs should be maintained. Thus, the revised sentence is the above in bullet point.
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i really like this! like ALOT!! but there is something about the end that doesnt satisfy the ending of the poem so for that reason, i would give this an 8.5/10 its outstanding overall though!
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