Answer:
It sounds too casual
Explanation:
It can be made more effective by adding a more professional tone and add more specific details about themselves or there past experience working which would hopefully encourage the reader to invite her to an interview. There is also currently punctuation and spelling errors in her letter which won't look good to a possible future employer.
Hello there ^ _ ^
When my sister and I were very young, we believed that we could dig a hole to China, the antipodes of our backyard.
I hope this help!
Answer:
See explanation
Explanation:
Universal Model School,
90 Aba Owerri Road,
Aba.
July 13, 2021.
The Headmaster,
Universal Model School,
Aba.
Sir,
A LETTER OF CONGRATULATIONS
It is with great joy that I write this letter of congratulations to you. We are happy to receive you in our school. We have heard of your wonderful record in your former school.
In this school, we have several challenges. Firstly, the restrooms for students are not in order. Most of us have to use the surrounding bushes as our convenience. This problem requires urgent attention.
Secondly, many students have become lazy towards their studies thereby leading to a drop in the standard of the school. This has caused the school to loose its reputation among schools in Aba.
Lastly, this school has an urgent need of a means of transportation for students coming from a distance. We have many students coming from very far regions of the city and they need a school bus to bring them to the school and take them home everyday.
We trust your capacity to fix these challenges as soon as possible.
Yours Faithfully,
Jude Njoku
School Prefect
Answer:
I'm in suspect but I think it's on
