Sounds a little weird but it sounds better than with 'when' twice.
Answer: Could you happen to explain this a little bit better? Also this website isn’t and should not be used to write essays. This website is here to help people with questions. Not write full and complete essays for one another.
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Answer: Question 1) Im not 100% certian that i will be correct but it will be, "banning baseball bats is nessasary in order to ensure the safety of younglings" , Question 2) first fact, Between 1991 and 2001, 18 players were killed due to metal baseball bats. Many lawsuits have been won over by parents by sueing them over making the aluminum bats. metal bats endanger young ones who play baseball. Question 3) "Some people believe that wooden bats are to expensive to supply in young leages because they are not as long lasting".
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