I thinks is a good paragraph so far but instead of putting humans interact with one another put get along with one and other and boevelop and beautiful bond . Also don’t put as you can tell just start with lennie. Also don’t start with a sentence with And around the last part of your paragraph. :) hope that helped you did really good
<span>The Mayflower brought the group of English settlers now known as the Pilgrims to North America. Leaving England in the fall of 1620, the Pilgrims were attempting to land near the mouth of the Hudson River, but instead ended up in Cape Cod Harbor. Plymouth, the colony established there by the Pilgrims in 1621, became the first permanent European settlement in New England. The story of the Pilgrims and their harvest feast has since become one of best-known in American history, but you may not know it as well as you think. Discover the facts behind these well-known Thanksgiving myths!</span>