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Ashley wanted a puppy. One day, he talked to his family for hours. At first, they did not believe had the time to care for the puppy. Then, Ashley created a puppy-care plan. His family <u>finally</u> agreed.
Explanation:
Temporal (time) transitions are used to move the story forward and show the sequence of events. They indicate the frequency, duration, specific time, or beginning or end of something.
When used at the beginning of the sentence, transition words and phrases should be followed by a comma.
Bolded words are the temporal transitions that can be used to revise the given paragraph, while the underlined word <em>finally</em> is a temporal transition that had already been included.
If you answered all of the questions correctly and well and you think you did a good job just submit it as is
If there's fog, you could say that "a veil of mist obscures faraway buildings/houses". You can say how the weather makes you feel. Maybe the cloudy sky is "a melancholic shade of gray". (melancholic means "expressing pensive sadness") Maybe the clouds and the cool weather is "refreshing", or the air feels "crisp". If it's cloudy and moist outside, but also kind of hot, you can say that the weather is "humid". I can't write the page for you, but I hope the ideas help!
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