OVERALL GRADE: 3 ; too many grammar mistakes.
FEEDBACK/"FIXES":
<em>Hook:</em> Change it to: "Breakfast, anyone? How about more sleep and better grades? These seem appealing, right? These are just a few benefits of school convening later in the day."
<em>Claim/Thesis:</em> Change it to: "The school day should begin at 9:45 AM because it would allow students additional time to prepare for their school day; they would be better rested, perform better, and engage more in physical activities."
<em>Evidence/Reasoning #1:</em> Change it to: "After all, students' brains are still asleep when it's early in the morning. Schools that start at 9:00 AM or later allow students the opportunity to get the recommended amount of sleep [8.5 - 9.5 hours.]"
Okay I have to go now but I hope what I provided helps.
Make sure to use a rhyme scheme and write about something you love!
Answer:
Character vs. Society
Character vs. Self
Character vs. Characher
Explanation:
1. Society forbids superheroes
2. Simba believes he had killed his father
3. Mowgli must defend himself against Shera Kahn
Some of the words in literature are hard for some people to understand. They translate it to make it easier for people to read.