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Doss [256]
3 years ago
13

During a revision process, which type of wording should a writer delete in a narrative essay?

English
2 answers:
Murrr4er [49]3 years ago
6 0
A narrative essay is usually a story. When writing or retelling a story, you want to avoid repetition in sentences and overuse of certain words. Another thing to avoid/remove would be breaks in perspective, along with using the writing style for informational essays, such as an argument essay or a how-to.
NeX [460]3 years ago
5 0
Unneeded repetition words like the, and<span />
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