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1) I would say that barbecue is a good choice.
2) Personally, I don’t like staying out late.
3) In my experience, people prefer a relaxed atmosphere.
4) It depends on the place.
5) As far as I know, they don’t have them.
6) I think we could ask people to bring their own food.
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why do you need this? and why a essay?
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I would change "Martin's and his family" to "Martin and his family's" and "his family" doesn't need to be in parentheses.
I would change the first commentary sectence to "Martin's Grandfather speaks in sioux which is his native language." and go into futher explanation on what he "knows". It's kind of a cliff hanger.
For the second commentary sentence, you should make sure to mention who's grandfather you're talking about if they are multiple in the story. Also I would change the sentence to "The grandfather exhibits his culture while wearing traditional clothing. The traditional clothing is typically worn by people of his tribe."
For the last commentary sentence, I would change it to "The quote states that the males in the family still follow traditions because it will eventually be passed down through generations.
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