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I think the most helpful way to create a more formal and professional tone is to eliminate the informal language.
Explanation:
The paragraph has phrases  like "<em>off the hook</em>", or homeless "<em>peeps</em>" that are not accurate for a formal request. If those words or phrases are changed for more formal ones, the whole request will sound more serious and important.
 
        
             
        
        
        
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He is caught stealing bread while the children go hungry. While in hiding, food was always an issue and the three families of the Franks, Van Daan and Dussel stayed together and had little portions.
However, Mrs. Frank catches Mr. Van Daan one night while stealing bread and she gets furious with him while him of being a poor father.
 
        
             
        
        
        
I am almost done.
P.S. It is very hard. :)
        
             
        
        
        
I think it’s B market economy. He makes goods for consumers needs.