Answer: This sentence is punctuated correctly and does not need to be rewritten
Explanation: PLEEEAAASSSE NO HATE COMMENTS IF I GOT THIS WRONG!!!!
In response to the argument that the British have protected the colonies, Thomas Paine argues that while this is technically true, the British have only done so for their own economic gain--not out of a feeling of altruism.
The .gov one because .gov means “government” and it is a site with facts and already done research. A blog is just an opinion
I'd say that the theme of this story encourages us that anyone can be important. Not just lawmakers or rich people or even extroverts, but anyone, whether you're a shy artist or an outgoing sporty-type. Some variation on that is probably what you're looking for, I shouldn't do your work for you! :)