The above question wants to analyze your writing skill. Also, you have not provided the text that should be edited. For these reasons, it is not possible to answer your question, but I will show you how to answer it.
First, you will need to read all the text and sentences to which the question refers. This reading must be able to point out elements of the text that must be edited, as they do not promote exact meaning, deviate from grammatical rules, and do not promote fluid and optimized reading.
During your editing, you should pay attention to the textual structure, which is the order in which the information in the text is presented. You must also identify whether the use of passive and active voice is correct.
<h3>Correct use of passive and active voice</h3>
- Passive voice: The subject does not promote the action of the verb, but suffers this action. Ex: The wall is painted by Dan.
- Active voice: The subject promotes the action of the verb. Ex: Dan is painting the wall.
Learn more about textual structure at the link below:
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