I think this will work:
There was only the churned water, filled with scantlings and torn branches of trees. ... It will send up the price of scantlings, and we was getting on too fast with them. About all the timber required to erect one of these houses is for joists, scantlings, and doors.
I am so sorry but I don't understand the question that you had asked.
Answer:
You could start by first explaing what they did well. You could comment on how well their plot is formed. You could say, " Well done, your plot is really good and it makes a lot of sense and your story was developed well."
Then you could comment on what they need to improve on. For example you could say " Next time, you could proof read your work and add the appropiate punction marks.
So what you should say should look like this:
Well done, ( the person's name), your plot is really good and it makes a lot of sense and your story was developed well. Next time, you could proof read your work and add the appropiate punction marks. But aprt from that, you did a fantastic job.
Explanation:
Answer:
The speaker has just survived or overcome something very big in their life, they have tooken a leap in their life. Beat the challenge, completed the goal.
