Explanation:
try not to repeat "My responsibilities".
In your last paragraph, try doing this...
" In terms on my education, my studies remain my first responsibility, to get educated, to earn a diploma and to become a successful person in the future, however in order for me to be a responsible person I need to focus on taking care of myself... ......"
something like that...
but other wise it is okay...
Answer:
-In Jonas’s community, children receive their life assignments at age 12. Discuss the entering of adulthood at this early age. How do you feel about being assigned one job for your entire life?
I would hate it cause i would still want the freedom of a teenager and not worry about work!
Explanation:
P.S i have read this book like 50 times and i love it!!!
