I think it would be an issue with the main character(s) that make them go on a journey.
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Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of being and ideal grace. I love thee to the level of every day's Most quiet need, by sun and candle-light. I love thee freely, as men strive for right.
Explanation:
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Answer: something you need to change is "you'll even get a higher paid! than the school you used to work for" to "you'll even get a higher paid than the school you used to work for". there seems to be a mistake there. also change your mistake to "besides all the great things i just mentioned this job has, this job will also help you gain more experience in communicating, interacting with different people, and kids making it easier for you, in case if in the future you decide to apply for jobs that involve working with kids"
besides all that, your essay was really good. i would've never came up with this essay or your ideas if I were YOU. it was really good. i think your essay is pretty convincing.
Explanation: it's pretty easy what i did. all i had to do was read the article/essay thoroughly from top to bottom and see if it seems correct and then move on to the mistakes and correct them.
The answer is C: I’m ready to try more advanced work to reach my programming goals.
In any personal statement, it is important to demonstrate your skills, and, above all, your goals in order to close the gap between the writer and the reader. Without missing the basic norms of exposition, that is to say, without lacking modesty, the writer should be able to show that she can tackle new challenges with joy and perseverance, like in this example, Marie´s statement shows.
<span>The
idea of this excerpt from John F. Kennedy’s speech is encouragement—encouragement
to fight for what is right, and what is right is freedom for all of humanity. This idea is introduced to us by the words “defending
freedom,” which appear at the beginning of the excerpt. The
idea is also reinforced at the end of the excerpt with the imperative statement
that implores citizens of the world to ask “what together we can do for the
freedom of man.”</span>
