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It was snowing again and I smiled as I stared at the white flakes fluttering by my window. It was (capitalized the C)Christmas, and my day had been one of the best all year. First I (had removed) awakened in the morning to the sound of my brother (added the n to runing)running madly around the house, yelling that it was Christmas. Jumping out of bed, (capitalized the i that was there)I skipped happily down the stairs, with my brother at my heels, and made my way to the Christmas tree in the living room. My parents(apostrophe removed from between the t and s) groggily walked down the stairs to watch us open (up removed) our presents. My Mom sat down on the couch and dad plopped himself on the floor, grumbling something about coffee. I started opening my presents because, after all, its ladies first. Ripping open the wrapping paper, I stared down at my brand(removed dash)new pink boom box. It was beautiful!(question mark changed to exclamation) (capitalized e)Even more, it came with little, stick-on jewels to decorate the boom box. Mom and Dad finally got their coffee and we all took turns watching each other open presents. I got(get turned to got) many more presents that were absolutely amazing. (changed every one into one word)Everyone spends the rest of the day admiring their gifts and playing with their new toys. "I will remember this Christmas forever,"(added endnote) I thought. (capitalized s)Sighing contentedly, I finally turned away from the snow (removed the e from what was danceing)dancing outside the window and rejoined my family.
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Answer:
A. Change student's to students'.
Explanation:
In sentence 8, the word <em>student's </em>should be changed to <em>students'</em>. The given text tells about a woman who became a nun and was sent to be a teacher in Calcutta, India. Every teacher has multiple students, and the text doesn't specify that Agnes was concerned about a particular student's education. This leads us to the conclusion that she was concerned about all of her students. The word <em>student's </em>would suggest that she was concerned about one student, while <em>students</em>' suggests that she was concerned about more of them. This is why option A is the correct one.
First Promote oneself is listed twice.
So i think the answer would be A, schools want to see what your skills are, what your capable of, want you've done for society, and how you work with others.
