Answer:
It's good
Explanation:
It's good however, do you need to add the same line on "Gleaming eyes, gleaming crystal eyes"?
Last sentence
explain: sentence 1 didn't close off the speech marks sentence 2 speech marks weren't necessary as it was indirect speech and sentence 3 did not put a comma at the end of the speech marks.
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Increasing fuel efficiency can help us both financially and ethically
