Answer:
Ashley wanted a puppy. One day, he talked to his family for hours. At first, they did not believe had the time to care for the puppy. Then, Ashley created a puppy-care plan. His family <u>finally</u> agreed.
Explanation:
Temporal (time) transitions are used to move the story forward and show the sequence of events. They indicate the frequency, duration, specific time, or beginning or end of something.
When used at the beginning of the sentence, transition words and phrases should be followed by a comma.
Bolded words are the temporal transitions that can be used to revise the given paragraph, while the underlined word <em>finally</em> is a temporal transition that had already been included.
Answer:
A girl should be able to go to the mall with her friends because she deserves freedom. a girls should be allowed to rule her own life. people need to stop treating her like a little girl when she doesn't act like one. the should be able to go where ever she likes.
A girl deserves to go out and have fun not just sit there and stay quiet when shes at home bored. She deserves to let out her thoughts and say stuff and talk about stuff she wants to talk about with her friends. She deserves the same attention as everyone else in her family.
A girl knows how hard it is not being able to express her feeling with people she's comfortable sharing them with she should be able to know what it feels like to go somewhere and shop with the money she has. A girl should feel good around the people she's used to being with.
A girl needs to know how important funds and going out feels like without that how would she be able to connect with people. and she needs to know what it doesn't feel like to feel broken inside and to be sad all the time because she can't go out.
And a girl should be happy a girl shouldn't be depressed because she can't go out. Let her have the opportunity to be with people she loves to be with and let her be with people let her have people that are there for her when she's sad or mad and what ever happens is on her and her friends
