The "me" is sentence 1 should be "I". The "our's" in the parentheses should be "ours", and the "me" should be "I" again. The "I" in the 2nd sentence after the parentheses should be "me". The "our's" in the 4th sentence after the parentheses should be "ours". In the sentence after, the "him" should be "he". In the sentence "The choice of party theme was her's", the "her's" should be "hers". And, in the sentence "They are afraid that friends won't come to their's if...", the "their's" should be "theirs". Finally, the "I" in the second to last sentence should be "me".
The second choice best applies to the given excerpt. First, it can be noted from this excerpt that the writer wants to convey a pessimistic view of fate. With that, the last choice will not apply to the paragraph anymore. The second and third choices do not apply as well because all words used were neither jargon nor difficult. Rather the words and phrases used like, "interested...but changed their minds", "frustrated", and "revolution in the mountains", were easy to grasp and quickly conveys how a possibly bright future has turned into a sour one.
