Answer:
4. She changed it to "Curse of the Tetherball Fiend" and sent it again.
Explanation:
In the first sentence, "Children" is a noun and should not be capitalized.
In the second sentence, "phantom" isn't capitalized but should be as part of the title.
In the third sentence, "Magazine" is a noun and should not be capitalized.
Answer:
- Help overcome anxiety.
Explanation:
An effective speech requires a passionate and confident speaker who possesses enough strength and courage to not only face the audience but convince them through his through research, knowledge, and communication skills required to effectively deliver the topic he/she is discussing.
As per the question, 'imagining oneself as a nervous yet successful speaker' functions as a tool to 'assist in overcoming anxiety(to face the crowd)' and presenting your ideas more confidently. This positive attitude would assist in convincing the audience more constructively(through efficiently conveying the ideas) and help evoke the desired response from them.
She is so beautiful, loving, kind, her hair shimmers like stars in the moonlight, her eyes are like tiny suns, her laugh is like a bubbling stream, her figure is more beautiful than Aphrodite. She is his Goddess, his savior, his light. He devotes all his time to making her feel happy.
Answer: I read the text and it seems perfect and I think you don't need to add anything else.
Explanation:
Analyzing the task and the way you responded it seems to me that you did it well. You were precise in each of the years. I think you should not add more since it would be a bit more extensive and the important thing about this task is to point out the most important events of each year. In my opinion, I wouldn't change anything, I think it's very good.
I could also see that you used the connectors that the statement showed. You have followed the instructions very well. Congratulations!