1 ig lol your question wasn’t too specific.
Capitalize "a" after the colon and before woman
The synonym of contact is direct a synonym of erode is break down a synonym of moisture is moist(maybe)a synonym of formation is structure a synonym of particles is dust a synonym for repeition is again a synonym for structure is format, a synonym of visible is clear does that help????
You need a thesis statement in your intro paragraph. "Even" in the first sentence is capitalized even though it is after a comma. Rather than just giving background, try to relate the background info to examples in the novel.
