The first and last one the second one is good too but the first and last are better
(Sorry some words may be different as it is in British English and I prefer writing in it)
Introduction by Mimiwhatsup:Over 500 students came to the Mason High School football team's game where they won the state championship. The two final teams Sutter High and Mason High played a controversial game. The weather outside was 32 degrees outside. Both teams played a hard game Mason High travelled 60 miles to the game. So that they could be the high school football team.
Body Paragraph: First, when Mason High School won it was the very first championship they ever won. This game was played on Monday, December 1st on a cold winter day but that was no matter to the football teams. The two teams were wearing red and yellow with a scoreboard of 56-34 to the very end. The teams' quarterbacks or seniors were prepared and ready to meet and play. Mason High School was declared the winner at the end for a specific high score of 56 and became their very first team to win at their school in championships.
They created humor and made people smile so primitive people which means people who are derive from anyone else they smiled and created something of which is called communication.
