No, I love it! I think it is perfect!
Answer:
Cancelled
Explanation:
"Cancelled" is the best word that helps us understand the meaning of "lack",
since it's a negative word.
Answer:
Love it!
Explanation:
Includes subtle biblical references within your poem.
Concise yet deep.
The only inconsistent part is the first stanza - it is the only section with any variation of "you" in it, which is totally fine but it stands out a little.
Other than that, I think it's great :)
