Read the following sentence: The ball was hit very hard by the rookie baseball player, and then it flew over the fence very quic
kly. Which revision is the most concise way to write this sentence without losing important information? When the baseball was hit hard, it zoomed over the fence as far as the eye could see. The rookie smacked the baseball, and it zoomed over the fence. The rookie hit the baseball hard and fast. When the rookie baseball player hit the baseball, the ball flew over the fence very fast.
The revision that is most concise was to write the sentence is The rookie smacked the baseball, and it zoomed over the fence.
<h3>What is revision?</h3>
Revision is the rewriting of some text to make it more concise and easy to understand. Revising a text is an important part of writing to avoid any mistakes. In the given sentence, the sentence is made more concise with decreasing the extra words.
