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Tju [1.3M]
2 years ago
11

Help need in 10 minutes FIX IT! EDITING

English
1 answer:
kotykmax [81]2 years ago
5 0

We see here that some of the mistakes are:

  • Year - should be "year" (line 4)
  • they're - should be "their" (line 5)
  • A - should be "an" (line 6)
  • no full stop at the end of line 8.
  • no comma after Chili challenge (line 11)
  • highlight's - should be "highlights"
  • emphasis - should be "emphasize"
  • wont - should be "won't"

<h3>What is punctuation?</h3>

Punctuation is actually known to be a way of writing with the insertion of typographical marks, signs and symbols in order to make writing understandable.

We can see that the above are some mistakes made and their correction.

Learn more about punctuation on brainly.com/question/1224394

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