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masya89 [10]
2 years ago
14

Look at your rough draft. Copy a paragraph that has mostly short simple sentences. Change your paragraph by combining two simple

sentences into one. Underline your change. Explain if you will keep the change for your final essay and why or why not.
English
1 answer:
Molodets [167]2 years ago
3 0

A good sample of how to combine simple sentences into one is:

  • I am working- Simple sentence
  • I will sleep- Simple sentence
  • I am working, and when I am done, I will sleep. One sentence.

<h3>What is a Revision?</h3>

This refers to the edition of a text in order to make it better, through the removal of obsolete details or through the addition of new information.

Hence, we can see that when making revisions for a written essay or work, it is important to keep the important details and eliminate the ones that contains errors to make it good and easy to read and understand.

Read more about revisions here:

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